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cross-posted from: https://feddit.de/post/5328368

The idea is to have a piece of fiction that you can give a person to experience the Fediverse while also being moderately entertained in the process. So: would you give this story to a person that doesn’t know anything about the Fediverse? I would love to hear your opinions. I will try to incorporate feedback into the story but no promises!

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[–] sbv@sh.itjust.works 2 points 11 months ago (1 children)

I wrote it myself :D But its fine. I hoped it would be fun to read.

Getting someone else to edit it would help. There's a lot going on in every sentence.

[–] blue_berry@feddit.de 1 points 11 months ago

Yeah, probably. So you like the story in general its just too much going on?